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The Curse
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The Curse |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
There she goes, that empty shell She is nothing but a distant figure just trying to survive in this world, a living nightmare that is her hell. Her head bears an invisible symbol, which can only be seen by the one who bestowed it upon her very soul that fateful day the curse was sown. What happened to her that night the curse came into full realization, has been unspoken all this time which has left the scar on her mind. You see the curse was not caused by the event that occurred long ago, but was a result of the silence that had followed in its shadows. The silence is the curse she bares, never letting go of its strangle hold. She shall always wander the earth with a secret of pain, never ceasing to consume her. "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All [This message has been edited by Elias Nevermore (01-11-2008 08:05 PM).] |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
It kind of sounds like you are trying to describe Fiona from Shrek in a sort of way. But it was still fairly well written |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ummm it seemed to me that i couldn't find the rythem or patteren, but that may just be me, i'll look over it again and see it again, hopeful i won't be as fogged as i am now. lol sorry for blithering. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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