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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2008-01-08 05:38 PM


this isnt great but its a start. it needs some work.
dum! dum!
that is the sound of my beating heart
it rings in my ears and echoes through the hall
cant you hear it?
you of all
it beats for you
it dances in my chest

it would die for you
its loyal to you until its very last fatal beat
it gives you everything and asks nothing in return
it burns with the love it holds for you

now it is dieing
its ending its last dance
it loved you
you killed in return
now its broken and torn
a new one cant be born

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