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ily06.12.07
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since 2007-11-24
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0 posted 2008-01-08 11:04 AM


At the bottom of every bottle I see what is blind.
I see love,
I see me,
I see you,
I see the future.
As I walk the room becomes smaller,
I feel closed in.
With every breath I feel my heart beat,
its becomes slower with every breath.
As I fall to the floor I hear your voice in my head saying
"Every things going to be okay,
jus keep breathing stay awake,
do it for me, i love you."
I find myself trying to answer you but I cant,
I'm so numb.
I try so hard to keep you happy and near,
but I realized the only way to keep you close and near,
is not to try so hard.
As I wake up in the morning I wish you were here,
I know you want to be here,
but you have your own bed to wake up in.

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1 posted 2008-01-09 12:37 PM


wow loved this, been here before know how this all feels...
Krysti

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