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Teen Poetry #8

Estranged

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2008-01-07 07:41 PM

Estranged

I am estranged
A creature of infinite difference
And yet through all of this
I feel rather more than plain

So, we say everyone is special
Coded secrets to tell the strangled truth
No one is any more special
Not than anyone else

So why do we lie
And paint the black words
In a see-through coating of white
That makes us feel our reasons are right

So kill the sin sacrifice
The lamb that surely must die
We’re sitting in the darkness
Waiting in dire haste for a glimpse of light

I am estranged
A distant watchful wanderer
Living in the world that hates me
But live in it I will

I live for a cause to die for

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

1 posted 2008-01-08 01:24 PM

wow this was such an intriguing poem. great job.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-09 08:23 PM

It's a very intriguing poem, and it keeps the mind going and thinking. I loved this poem, it makes you feel the person is looking out at the world we have here. Nice job

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