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Teen Poetry #8

Thinking of You

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2008-01-05 05:58 PM

I think of you
All the time
For the thought of you brings a smile to my face
Though a tear to my eye

I know I'll never be yours
I'm not beautiful like those other girls
But if you would just open your eyes
You'd see I could be your whole world

I know...I know
Your out of my league
And no matter what happens
I know you'll never be with me

But I think of you
Everyday
For the thought of you brings comfort to my soul
Though to my heart such pain

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-01-05 06:03 PM

aww pen, so sad and so relateable.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

stil_watrs_run_deep
Junior Member

since 2008-01-05

Posts 14
missouri

2 posted 2008-01-09 10:47 PM

this is so great at explaining how girls feel about wanting something you cant have (well me anyway). i think most people can relate to this somehow.. i think that its awesome that you could explain it in words.

smiles are universal :]

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2008-01-10 09:20 AM

Very relatable which is always a good thing I think, nice job

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

4 posted 2008-01-13 11:48 AM

this was short and sweet. i really liked it. i was trying to make a poem like this but i couldnt get the flow right. yours gets it just right. amazing poem.

-jenna

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