Code Blue (True Story - You Will Believe In Angels)

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

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Australia

0 posted 2008-01-05 06:44 AM

Okay guys.. i was sitting in the hospital with my mum the other night so this is based on what happened that made me (someone who's never believed in angels) believe in them. Hope you enjoy..

Code Blue

Watching a waiting
Pleading and praying
That the word’s “Code Blue”
Are just another saying

The days have shortened
The nights more black
The Ambulance is coming
So please stand back

Out of the ambulance
Comes a sweet little boy
He’s covered in water
Clutching his toy

Its seems there’s been an accident
Said the officer to the doctor
It’s seems this man and boy
Should have been brought by helicopter

It was horrid site sir
I was scared to death
But that man he kept on swimming
Although he could barely take a breath

When we got there
the boat was turned upside down
The boy was ashore
Screaming Daddy Please Don’t Drown

Together they wheeled the man
Into the dreary room
And promised the little boy
That he could see daddy soon

The man was barely breathing
He’d been like it for a while
The little boy was crying
He couldn’t force a smile

The doctors stabilized
The weak and dreary man
And told his little boy
That they’d be with him when they can

The little boy got scared
With nobody he knew in site
He walked into his daddy’s room
And turned out the light

He sat by his daddys bed
And said a little prayer
I pray that daddy will be okay
And all this was just a scare

I know I’m not a good boy
But really i’m not bad
But god if you take my daddy
I will be so very sad

I know it my fault the boat tipped over
but i dropped my jelly bean
snd i had to try and catch it
Before it could no longer be seen

Then before he knew it
His prayer was done
The nurses called code blue
And little boy did run

But something deep inside that room
Brought a miracle that night
It touched lives of even me
It made everything alright

Above that sick man’s bed
Was a bright shining glow
God knows how it got there
He showed it where to go

Five minutes later
That man sat up in bed
The nurse screamed out gleefully
“Hey this man’s not dead”

The little boy came running
Tears rolling down his face
Daddy you’re not dead
I thought you’d gone without a trace

The man sat up and smiled
Pulled the cover from his head
You couldn’t get rid of me that easily
So offcourse I’m not dead

The doctors couldn’t believe it
They’d given up all hope
They wrote deceased on his file
And wondered how the boy would cope

But the man and the little boy
Had a secret nobody knows
For trapped in each of their hands
Was a feather white as snow

Nothing will explain
how that man made it through tonight
But we know that angels do exist
Even though they're out of sight

Belinda
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since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

1 posted 2008-01-05 07:37 AM

that was truly amazing,
touching.

beaten hands down, but I'll get better with time, haha.

seriously, so impressive.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-05 04:13 PM

o wow hunn, you actually brought tears to my eyes. Such a solid, and beautiful write
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2008-01-05 05:45 PM

That was one of the most beautiful things you have ever written, the best, bar none. wow. Inspiring. I've always believed in angels, it's nice to hear they let others know them too.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
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4 posted 2008-01-05 08:13 PM

wow very touching

Derek
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since 2007-10-20

Posts 38
New Hampshire, USA

5 posted 2008-01-05 08:22 PM

I dont even know what to say, this was amazing, my favorite by you.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2008-01-05 08:23 PM

everything's derek's faveortie today . . . lol. teasing teasing. lol.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Derek
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since 2007-10-20

Posts 38
New Hampshire, USA

7 posted 2008-01-05 09:52 PM

hahaha, I ment this was my favorite poem of all of her's.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

8 posted 2008-01-05 11:56 PM

Thanks guys.. its nice to see that i haven't gotten sloppy in my older age (pfft no so old but i'm feeling it) lol.. But thanks...

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

9 posted 2008-01-06 01:54 AM

An assassin is a being of stealth and speed and prefers to remain hidden. But since I am one of verse, I openly applaud this beautiful poem. *clap clap clap clap*

Haha...But seriously, nice one.

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

10 posted 2008-01-06 02:03 AM

Thanks Assasian.. made me smile lol.. thanks for reading.. Hmm Where's CO when u want him to read something.. I'm gunna kick that young boys buttox lol

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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11 posted 2008-01-06 10:13 AM

i know derek i know, only teasing. lol. it's nice to have so much great stuff show up, eh?

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

12 posted 2008-01-07 07:19 PM

I loved this one, maybe because I also believe in Angels. great job!!

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

13 posted 2008-01-17 08:19 AM

this is amazing really touching

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

14 posted 2008-01-19 05:54 PM

wow.. was the feather part real? this is not only an amazing poem, but also an amazing story!

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

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Neverland

15 posted 2008-02-02 12:59 PM

wow Jess that was beautiful. I was crying at one part and smiling at the next. Great job.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

16 posted 2008-02-02 09:53 PM

That is amazing. (refering to both poem and story) I believe in the power of God to do such miricles as this, but it's nice to see it in verse. I to applaud this amazing poem, it's poet and the faith of the little boy that made it happen!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

17 posted 2008-02-02 11:29 PM

Wow this is touching great poem

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