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i took a risk (revised)
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i took a risk (revised) |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
this is the revised version tell me what you think. once i loved you i was happy if you called me boo i was ready to run away just to be with you then things changed suddenly you were the reason for my pain who am i to blame? its not your fault you dont love me too i choose to tell you my deepest secret i vowed to never tell no one you called me a liar i came undone what was love turned to hate you called me asking how can i hate some i love i said its simple you made me come undone you broke the remaining peices of my heart then some how you made me laugh once again you made the pain vanish without a trace then i loved you again you made things go from dark to light you made things bright you put me back together now once again i have fallen in love with you knowing there is nothing i can do but love you |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
Wow. I can relate to this. Loved it. |
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