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Teen Poetry #8

Class Joker

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

0 posted 2007-12-18 02:37 PM

Class Joker

You think you're funny,
Think you rule,
Think your the greatest,
But you act like a fool.

All that laughing and joking,
Messing around,
Trying so hard to keep your feet on te ground.

You haven't heard the whispers,
Behind your back,
You would think they would relax,
Give you some slack.

But no, every trip up,
Every mistake,
The words on the tip of their tongues.
Yes. You're a fake.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-12-18 02:59 PM

wow I loved this really great flow

Krysti

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

2 posted 2007-12-18 04:55 PM

nice flow...

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2007-12-19 06:17 AM

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.. reminds me so much of a girl i go to school with nice write...

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

4 posted 2007-12-19 10:59 AM

thanks so much for the comments. I really enjoyed writing this.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2007-12-20 09:30 PM

ummm, i liked the ending- unexpected.

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

6 posted 2007-12-20 10:03 PM

hmmm...good write. Though, it might help the flow a bit if you took out 'like' in the fourth line...Really good.

Pen

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