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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2007-12-18 12:11 PM


i love you with all my heart
you say you love me too
i sit here with nothing to do but think about you
i think that one day well have kids
that one day i wont tell you fibs

it is so hard to love you cause i mean nothing to you
i can loose you like that
i could fall down and go splat
there my heart goes its slipping
and now its splitting

i lay broken on the floor
wishing there was more  
i have no heart because you dropped it
now im left with nothing and i cant stop it

the pain it takes hold of me
all i want to do is flee
it goes so deep
i cant even sleep...



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fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

1 posted 2007-12-18 01:16 PM


you have been writing with your heart in your hand and it's a painful inspiration. I loved it!
sexykitten15
Junior Member
since 2007-07-22
Posts 34

2 posted 2007-12-18 04:34 PM


Ive never known anyone to put so much emotion into their poems.

its def. a major inspiration. yet it hurts me to say so.

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