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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
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0 posted 2007-12-16 02:50 PM


this is about how i feel right now.

i look around me
how could this be?
things are falling apart
everyone is breaking except me

i close my eyes
i block it out
i think only of the happy things
the darkness is creaping towards me

i open my eyes and i look around
its right behind me
i start to run but cant see
my legs wont work and i cant breath

oh no its got a hold of me
how can this be?
things are falling apart
everyone is breaking even me

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-12-18 12:24 PM


Ahh Jenna I know this feeling all to well just keep holdinh on hunn.
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-12-18 12:02 PM


This was really good. I can relate to what you are saying. Nice writing doll
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