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A Horror in my mind
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A Horror in my mind |
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greeneggs-n-ham Junior Member
since 2007-06-05
Posts 14 |
i wrote this for a poetry contest on a different site. The topic was "a place" and so this is what i came up with. comments and critics are much appreciated. A Horror in My Mind I blink, clear my vision Fall asleep, then wake up Blinking, blurring In pain my head erupts I see him passing To hurt or Protect me? Changing, rearranging Brings me to me knee I cannot stay Need to go, need to leave Gaping, gasping I can’t seem to breathe I hear each foot Fall steady, fall true Racing, running But from who? I see each face As I pass their eyes Cold, deadly Hiding in lies I push myself One more step, one leap Falling, face down I feel blood seep My clothes tarnished They rip and tear Disintegrate, detach Leaving me bare Now in a different place Black clothes, black heart Spinning, swirling From consciousness depart Alone in an alley A new path, or route? Crawling, crying How do I get out? Im awake in my sleep Rest I cannot find Nighttime, nightmare A horror in my mind some parts are...chaotic, i guess, but they are supposed to be. A lot of nightmares dont make sense. |
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pink panther 08 New Member
since 2007-12-09
Posts 7Valdosta,Ga |
That was a wonderfull poem, such a great piece of art. I hope you win the contest. Your poem and so many other peoples poems on here will inspire me to write better. I know how you or who ever you are writeing for feels. Over all great poem. |
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