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I Am (begging you guys to pretty pleasae read this)

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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I Am

I am the ray of light
That cuts right through
The broken blinds that you hold
Hostage in your room

I am from sunny shores
With unfiltered sunshine lighting rays
And children’s screams and laughter
(Those keep me up all day)

I am a small and gentle voice
And a loud and deadly stare
I am the words of many nights and days
And the wheat like color hair

I am the slight in stature
But also the large in heart
I am the large eye stare
That keeps our worlds apart

I am the last of my kind
Till my star eyed child comes
I am a wild rose
That no man yet has won



"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."


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wolf girl
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1 posted 12-14-2007 08:55 PM       View Profile for wolf girl   Email wolf girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wolf girl

i like it. ;]
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2 posted 12-14-2007 11:16 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"I am a small and gentle voice
And a loud and deadly stare"


"I am the slight in stature
But also the large in heart"


loved those parts

very much enjoyed all of it, those lines just struck me as awesome.
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3 posted 12-15-2007 02:51 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

Oh Kate Darling this has got to be one of my favorites from you.. it was beautiful
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4 posted 12-15-2007 09:49 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

thanks to you all. i enjoyed writing this. it was for some challenge in the poetry challenge.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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5 posted 12-16-2007 06:57 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

KATE KATE KATE.. i must learn to keep my socks off before reading your poems.. Cause everytime i read one u blow them  off.. lol.. Yea lame joke i know but its the thought that counts and i really loved this.. One of ur best... Except you stole the title or the poem i was about to post... so now i have to go think of another but hell it was worth the pair of socks..
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 12-16-2007 09:56 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

awwwwwwwww thanks! that means alot, and it may just be my wacked sense of humor, but i thought your joke was pretty cute. and very thoughtful.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

 
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