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SiR3N
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since 2007-03-07
Posts 16
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2007-12-12 03:14 AM


I posted this on here a looong time ago, and ive decided to repost it for those who liked my poem "The Heart". Personally this is my favorite poem...

I cant tell you how I feel.
The words wont cling; they drift away,
intoxicated, slight, unreal,
resisting what I want to say

(how I know our love won't fade,
the things I dream when you are gone,
the stuff of which all want is made,
why absences go on and on).

They reel and stow away their charms,
distracted, shady, and aloof;
I'd rather have you in my arms
and whisper nothings, love, as proof.

© Copyright 2007 Jarrod Newman - All Rights Reserved
*CaT*
Junior Member
since 2007-12-07
Posts 46
Oxford, England
1 posted 2007-12-12 02:43 PM


again, a beautiful poem written by u. I really like your choice of words, it makes your relationship sound perfect and destined
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-23 12:36 PM


HAVE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!

I really enjoyed this poem



ARCTIC WIND

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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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3 posted 2007-12-23 01:51 PM


Wow Jarrod that was amazing I loved it
Merry Christmas
Krysti

xbrokenxlullabyx
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since 2007-12-25
Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.
4 posted 2007-12-25 10:01 PM


wow, this is just amazing. It is so intimate yet everyone can relate to it, it's beautiful.

Susanna V.

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