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Romantic
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since 2007-12-10
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Lost in the eyes of the one i love

0 posted 2007-12-11 08:01 AM



I will be here when you need someone to talk to,
I will be here when you need some help,
I will be here when you hurt yourself,
I will always be here for you, my love.

I will be here when the sun rises,
I will be here when the sun sets,
I will be here when all hope seems lost,
I will be here to help you through.

I will be here when the oceans dry up,
I will be here when the river runs dry,
To hold your hand and comfort you,
While you let go and cry.

I am here to be your rock,
Something you can lean against.
When you feel the worst is yet to come,
i'll be right there to hold you and listen.

So i guess what i'm trying to say,
is that i love you in every single way.
Your smile brings me great joy,
when you cry i cry to.

I am here to be strong,
in times that you can not,
If you ever need me just remember,
I love you for ever and ever.

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

© Copyright 2007 Mark Jochs - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-12-11 06:31 PM


oh, this was beautiful, i want to read more- you get better each time. oh, it's so sweet. if only every guy cared as much for someone as you do for this girl, there would never be a tear in the eye of any girl.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Romantic
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since 2007-12-10
Posts 28
Lost in the eyes of the one i love
2 posted 2007-12-11 10:38 PM


thats what she keeps telling me... that i'm so sweet... i just wonder sometimes if thats the only thing she likes about me...

Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
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3 posted 2007-12-12 01:00 AM


Mark.. this was so beautiful I loved it and Kate I agree with youz on this.. if only all guys were like you Mark I hope things work out.. in the end they all do...
Krysti

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25
Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia
4 posted 2007-12-12 01:05 AM


awww this was definitely sweet but also much more; you can see how strongly you feel for this person with every word of this!  and yes i agree, if only there were more guys out there like you.

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