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Romantic Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 28Lost in the eyes of the one i love |
Well i have know this girl for a while now but it was only about 2 months ago that i realised that i actually liked her... so i told her and she liked me back.. the problem was that she had a boyfriend that i dident know about but i found out about... so this is what i wrote... When i gazed apon you for the first time, I dident know what i felt. There was something there but i wasen't sure, Untill we just sat down and talked. I realised right then what i felt, But wasent sure if it was real. We talked for a bit but then you asked, And i told you that i liked you. If i had know at the time i wouldent have spoke, But as i found out later you couldent be mine. You were with him, it hurt at the time, And it still does just you dont know. We continued to talk and then you said it, Those magical words that say "I love you". I was supprised at first i dident know what to say, So i said it back and it felt so right. Now the time has gone on and your still not mine, I wonder if you ever will be. Every day it gets harder, I dont know if it will stop. I love you with all my heart, I just wish you could do the same. Love... it is the best feeling in the world... but beware.. the path to happyness can hurt alot [This message has been edited by Romantic (12-11-2007 12:21 AM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this reminds me soo much of what I went through not had it done 2 me but done it to someone I guess you could say... loved this write Mark very guud  Krysti |
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Determined Junior Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 14Canada |
Umm, I liked this too... Kinda reminds me of a situation I had a while back, but that didn't end well (Ended up just moving on - got tired of waiting.)... Can't wait to read more. Determined |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ummm, we the women of the world, have so much to handle, give her a little more time, and then tell her you can't wait. It hurts us a little, but it spurrs into action the reaction you wish. -Kate
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