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Teen Poetry #8

Nonsense to a Beat

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-12-09 03:52 PM

okay, don't ask me for an explaination, because this was just in my head and i just wrote it down. i don't know what it means, i don't even really know what it says to a certain extent, it's a bunch of jibberish, if you amke any sense of it i'd love to hear what you have figured out.

-Kate

Nonsense to a Beat

Images keep flying in
And everybody ducks
No one seems to know where they
Have come, it just their luck

I don’t know, but I’ve been told
That everybody sees
The stranger ways the world once had
And the way it used to be

It has been the strangest thing
That I have ever seen
No one has been talking of
The way things used to be

So let us talk of rhymes and schemes
They no longer mean
What they had in glory once
Attained and meant to me

The world is done and suddenly
No one feels regret
It is a rather stranger thing
Than any I have met

So now adieu seems right to say
I’m sorry it won’t do
But all the things that I have
I’ll freely give to you

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-12-09 11:27 PM

I'm not sure what it means either but its good

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2007-12-10 12:45 PM

im not sure what it means but seems that u have a lot on your mind but imma read it again and see if i can figure it out oh and it was great it made me think which is a good thing

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

3 posted 2007-12-10 01:03 AM

prety good. the third stanza appears to be rambling and doesn't work consistently with the rest of the poem. I say drop that stanza, in order to make the poem flow better

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-12-10 02:34 AM

Aweez Kate Darling, I love this flow was really gudd

Krysti

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