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*CaT*
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0 posted 2007-12-07 01:35 PM



Unspoken Love

Each morning on the train,
Themselves they blame.
As they let each other walk away.

It may not be just,
It's not only lust.
It's deeper and more rooted than that.

She's planned their wedding,
But still she's dreading.
Inviting him along too.

He's too shy,
In case she won't reply.
If he asks her out on a date.

They've longed for each other,
Wished for one another.
Waited for the other to take a seat.

Still they regret,
But could never forget.
How he feels and she feels.
In love



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1 posted 2007-12-07 03:19 PM


Wow I =really loved this nice flow:P
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2007-12-08 08:54 PM


very cute cat. i liked it. thanks for sharing.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
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3 posted 2007-12-10 12:24 PM


thank you. i wrote it when i used to get the tube a lot; and you could just tell that this guy and girl secretly really liked eachother.
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4 posted 2007-12-11 06:56 PM


the tube, how cute, i love the way you Brits speak.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
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5 posted 2007-12-12 10:55 AM


lol thanx. A friend of mine is American and whenever she comes over she gets me to say "bottle" and stuff like dat. Y is it that Americans find the accent so funny? lol
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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6 posted 2007-12-12 12:58 PM


well, being american myself, with a deep british heritage, it's so fun to see the things we have certain names for being made into something different, just b/c you use different words. do what do you call bottles? oh and don't you guys call fries "chips"? lol. i just think it's adorable, and tube i'm pretty sure is tv right? lol.

-Kate

ps i'm enjoying talking to you


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
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7 posted 2007-12-12 02:17 PM


well we call bottles bottles, but my friend finds it funny because of my accent. The tube is the London Underground (trains) and yeah we call chips chips. Bt we call TV "telly", elevators "lifts", restrooms "loos" and other random stuff. Lol its so funny when I go 2 America cos as soon as I open my mouth people ask me 2 say typical British stuff and they 2 find it "cute". Oh yea, are secondary schools really like they r in the romcom films

P.S. I'm enjoyin talkin 2 u 2 lol and by the way I luv ure poem Scarlet Sin; i cant remember if i commented on it, bt its gr8

*CaT*
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8 posted 2007-12-12 02:21 PM


Kate - by secondary schools i mean ones in america
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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9 posted 2007-12-13 07:16 AM


do you mean middle schools (6-8 grades) or high school (9-12, which we also  call freshman-9th, sophmores-10th, juniors-11th, and seniors-12th) by secondary school?

this is great, we should email.

-Kate


well, what are romcom films? and yes, most schools are just like t.v. portrays them. the mean girls and the jocks picking on everyone else, and all of the seniors beating on the freshman and cat fights in the bathroom, yep, it's all true. lol.


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
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10 posted 2007-12-13 12:37 PM


Ummm i dnt know, thats confusing. In England its just year 7, 8, 9, 10 and 11 and then sixth form or college. Romcom films are romantic comedy. Oh thats a lot different from schools here. That stuff still happens bt its nt that bad. lol. yeah do you have msn?
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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11 posted 2007-12-13 06:36 PM


i did have an msn, but it was painful to keep it b/c i only had it to talk to some guy who liked this other girl anyways, so i dropped it.

and my school isn't really that bad, but it's frighteningly small. but regular schools here are. my school is some type of international based something or other.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

*CaT*
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12 posted 2007-12-14 10:37 AM


oh kk, dw bout it. Well my skl has got 2000 stuents so i guess i dont really know. Yea when you reply just reply to my email thing if u want
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