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Undecided
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0 posted 2007-12-06 03:33 AM


Our Story


To start off our story,
you'll need to gather close,
because if your presence were to be missed;
this wouldn't be my life.

Think to combine our souls,
pull away to part our lips,
to stare in your beautiful pools of wonder,
the oasis, your love.

Feel to touch our hearts,
in that oh so non-contemptuous way,
kiss to feel the connection
we could be miles, miles away.

But what good would that do us?
My parting of you, tear out my heart,
luckily, that will never happen,
"Till death do us part".

This is the story of me,
with pictures of you,
please tell me this is love
for otherwise, I'd be without a clue.


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Undecided
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1 posted 2007-12-07 06:43 PM


Anyone got any comments ?
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-12-10 01:08 AM


This is the story of me,
with pictures of you,

Woah i loved this very nice poem...
Krysti

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3 posted 2007-12-15 10:16 PM


Very Much Enjoyed



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