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sexykitten15
Junior Member
since 2007-07-22
Posts 34


0 posted 2007-12-03 06:59 PM



Ive tried so hard to understand.

but nothing has helped me become who i am.

my thoughts drip into this page as my tears hit the ground.



Rain drops, and the smell of cheap perfume linger the air.

Ive realized i just dont belong here.

I dont know why.

I dont know how.

It just is.



Im stuck in my heart where it is slowly caving in.

I ask myself why do i continue as I end up with heart ache and a whole lot of nothingness.



My eyes turn red.

I scream with anger.

What is so wrong with me.



I pull at my hair.

I bite my nails.

I beg for mercy.

You lead me on to belive that it might be.



And here i am spraeled on the floor.

Thinking of nothing more than what hurt me.



YOU.


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wolf girl
Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
1 posted 2007-12-03 07:53 PM


i really liked it. it had rhym here and there. it was differnt. nice job!
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-12-11 08:53 PM


Enjoyed



ARCTIC WIND

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