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sexykitten15
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since 2007-07-22
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0 posted 2007-12-03 06:49 PM



Afraid to love.
Afraid to Trust.
I fall to easy.
I want to give him everything.
nothing less.

There she is.
Standing there.
with a smirk on her face.
she knows she has him.
enjoying the pain it causes me.

He asks me whats wrong.
I smile and say nothing.

I cant fight the tears.
He takes her in his arms.
The tears begin to fall.

He knows i love him.
Is this worth it?
To lose it all?

I crawl into the dark corner of my room.
Felling nothing but the cold from the window.
Tears trickle down my face.

I Need To Let Go.

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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
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washington, US
1 posted 2007-12-03 08:23 PM


this makes sense and yes you do. i really did love it and i can realte. ^__^
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-12-04 01:24 AM


Well this was really good and I agree you do  need to move on. its gonna hurt might even take awhile but it will heal. might leave a scar but things will get better
Krysti

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since 2007-12-02
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Georgia
3 posted 2007-12-05 09:07 AM


this was really good. i could feel every emotion clearly in the poem. it was as if i were the girl in the poem watching. great job! :P

This angel has fallen
Her white wings went black
She is falling....
From heaven to hell
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