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Teen Poetry #8

"Euringer Forest Fire"

DanielSpencer
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since 2007-11-26

Posts 3
Ohio, United States

0 posted 2007-11-26 11:43 AM

i wrote this about a topic i found most interesting, and most disrespectful.

"Euringer Forest fire"

The damned, the drawn, none right and all wrong...

Yes children, these are the things forest fires are made of.

Embers of lies that scorch forests of fidelity,

forests of grandeur, forests of truth.

Propagate, intimidate, you're god when it all comes

from you, like a saint.

Hail, hail;

Daran erinnert werden:

"The fires of sedation destroy the

perfect country,"

... ... ...

I guess the forest was too much.

Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

1 posted 2007-11-26 07:14 PM

i dont exactly understand all of this one but something about it jumped out at me. You did a good job!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-28 01:25 AM

Welcome to Passions

Very nice poem
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

3 posted 2007-11-28 01:28 AM

Nice poem! Wait, let me rephase that! That was a great poem that made me more thankful that none of the Malibu fires have touched my area.
-Andrew

P.S. Welcome to Passions, where our passion for poetry burns hotter than flame.

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

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