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justanotherstorm
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0 posted 2007-11-24 08:54 PM


the title hmm yeah iono it looked cool
well here it aint dont but lemme know what u think

im rebellious,ambitious
but not superstitious
im a christian
dont think christ is fiction
cuz then you're wrong
yeah i fall
i guess im not that strong
im a human
im loved and hated
im not one to be traded
but i rise above
from deceit
im not scared of defeat
im not a dove
i aint pure
sorry,i dont have your cure
im a curse
but i'll be there for you first
im your enemy
im your friend
i'll die in the end
(2 b contin.)

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-11-24 09:03 PM


the title- yeah it rocked . . .

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

justanotherstorm
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2 posted 2007-11-24 09:06 PM


thnx
rebelangelv
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3 posted 2007-11-24 09:11 PM


idiosyncratic....isnt that a real word??? hmmm good stormy....very interesting...good job!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

justanotherstorm
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4 posted 2007-11-24 09:15 PM


thank u and yes it tis a real word it means distinctive, eccentric, peculiar, unique i think yeah
maddorani
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5 posted 2007-11-25 12:27 PM


wow it was good rite nicely rittened i liked it good job i like the title too
rebelangelv
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6 posted 2007-11-25 12:58 PM


u sooo looked that up!

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

justanotherstorm
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7 posted 2007-11-25 01:18 AM


looked what up
n thnx maddorani

maddorani
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8 posted 2007-11-25 09:05 AM


no problem
rebelangelv
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9 posted 2007-11-25 03:29 PM


the def ...duh

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

justanotherstorm
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10 posted 2007-11-26 07:15 PM


oh haha yea of course i did
*CaT*
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11 posted 2007-12-08 04:19 AM


gr8 poem. i think the title suits it, from ure dictionary definition lol
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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12 posted 2007-12-08 08:58 PM


whether or not you looked it up it rocks so much i love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

justanotherstorm
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13 posted 2007-12-10 12:33 PM


haha thnx ppl
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