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ily06.12.07
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since 2007-11-24
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0 posted 2007-11-24 07:42 PM



Today was the worst day in a while.
I only remember what keeps replaying in my mind,
Is you telling me your done with this relationship.
My world was shattering into pieces right in front of me.
Im 4 months pregnant, my first baby.
Im your love, your everything.
Sitting on the cold bathroom floor, crying my eyes out.
Thoughts of me being all alone, and having our baby, doing everything for the baby by myself.
The bathroom door swings open, and there you are.
In tears, getting me off the floor telling me you just couldn't leave.
Placing your hand on my heart and mine on yours,
you simply tell me that this heart is mine and promises where made of you never leaving but if you do your heart is still completely mine.
All I feel like doing now is buying a bottle of vodka,
and sipping it all.
I know i cant do that so ill settle for a chocolate bar and a cup of tea.
You whisper in my ear as i fall asleep
"I will love you forever and always, even if im not
around you will always have a giant place in my
heart."




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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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1 posted 2007-11-24 09:08 PM


this was interesting it got my attention
good write

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2 posted 2007-11-25 02:55 AM


Welcome to Passions, I really liked your fisrt post, it was so sweet well the end
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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3 posted 2007-11-30 07:49 PM


i was gald it was a happy ending, i don't think i could have hadled a sad ending in this one, not right now. thanks for the happy ending, they're not too common any more . . . . . any ways . . .welcome to passions!

-Kate




"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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