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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2007-11-24 02:12 AM



I'll be there when you call,
be there if you should fall...
But nothing more.

You can lay your head,
and your sorrows,
on my shoulders...
But I can't bear them for you.

When you're alone,
just dial my phone,
And I will answer...
Nothing less.

Lay your hands,
heavy with hurt,
on my own,
But i can't hold them forever.

I won't say I'm sorry,
But in the end,
I can't say good-bye,
So I'll stay by your side
as a friend.

So I'll be there,
should you call.
I'll be there,
to break your fall.
And maybe...
There'll be something more.


This song/poem (still can't decide which) is the result of almost a month of thinking. I've decided that I'm going to stay a loyal friend, instead of revealin how I feel. I love her as a friend to much to risk our friendship. We're both to young, and my head's clear enough to realize that.

When we are older you'll understand
What I meant when I said "No,
I don't think life is quite that simple"
-Utada Hikaru, Simple and Clean

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

© Copyright 2007 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-11-24 05:27 PM


I am glad that you have finally made a decision. I know that must have been hard. I loved this, it made me think of an old friend of mine. I wish you the best

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

2 posted 2007-12-07 12:30 PM


Wow this brought back memories for me. From what you wrote about having a clear head I applaud you not many young people can actually say that.
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-12-12 09:31 PM


Enjoyed ALOT!



ARCTIC WIND

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

4 posted 2008-01-02 12:16 PM


Read one I wrote it includes you.
hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2008-01-04 06:24 PM


Wow Andrew.. i loved this amazing write
Krysti

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