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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
Blood thirsty I need a drink Not alcohol Cuz then you cant think Nah I need blood So frustrated Just watchin my knife Am I motivated? Thinking about life Why live Do I gotta Why see I'm already blind Why breathe I don't wanna Just kill That's how I deal Wit life Wit frustration Wit my motivation Am I crazy... I don't know Am I lazy... Possibly But I need to kill... To deal I need to kill... To feel That I'm still alive Watch the dripping blood Runnin down my knife Then I'm satisfied |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
oh and i aint gonna kill this is just yeah..how i feel i guess |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
oo bloodthirsty? its not even a full moon...yet.. lol dont do nuthing tho k. this one was really good stormy. one of my favs of urs ...well that uve posted on here at least....one of ur best in my opinins  good job! blood...Vs If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thanks V but im gettin kinda thirsty if u know what i mean hehe oh and i wont do nothin..yet |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
ahem full moons....V's n W's lol n e ways really good job If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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justanotherstorm Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 321 |
thanx |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
yea i felt the emotion in this one i liked this one too but im too lazy to put my poems lol i mite gonna do it tommorrow |
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