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maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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houston,tx

0 posted 2007-11-20 12:28 PM



when a storm comes by
everything gets destroyed
but it seems like a storm came into my heart
and took all the happiness away from me
and made my heart into a lonely heart
a lonely heart that just want to be yours
now let me shed my tears like the raindrops dropping on the roads
and let me make a flood
and when the storm is over
let me drain away the flood of my tears
and fill my heart with joy again
but i know i will have a storm in my heart again
and destroy everything that i have
because i loved you
and the storm is you that't inside me
because you don't care for me
you never loved me back
but when there is a storm i could feel the loneliness
and the high pressured winds
me getting the shivers around the road somewhere
i'm just looking for you
a storm that took everything away from me
a storm that will stay inside my heart
a lonely me and a storm

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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

1 posted 2007-11-20 09:04 PM


wow great poem this is awesome i felt the emotion loved it so whose this about
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
Posts 423
houston,tx
2 posted 2007-11-20 09:08 PM


uh im not sure i think about the guy tht i had a crush on before not this one but if i submit icant belive its about hte guy who i liked no and i guess u could say im starting ot love u more is about him but not sure
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