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justanotherstorm
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0 posted 2007-11-19 10:58 PM



i thought i loved u
and i did at the time
but i ask myself
was that just emotions inside
was my love full of only romance and rhymes
and whyd i leave u behind
im sorry for hurting u
but i had to move on
you werent the one for me
im sorry but we have to be strong
im sorry for makin u feel pain
but i promise u it will go away someday
i still love u but not the way i used to
please forget me
and the way we used to be
i love u
but i have to move on
we gotta be strong


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maddorani
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1 posted 2007-11-19 11:01 PM


awww thats so sweet who was it about i felt the emotions do u think my poems were deep i guess me and u r freinds then
justanotherstorm
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2 posted 2007-11-19 11:03 PM


thanks it was for one of my friends but thats over now things changed
yeah we friends

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3 posted 2007-11-19 11:03 PM


yeah i think your poems are deep
maddorani
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4 posted 2007-11-19 11:10 PM


thanks but i have more but u could post only 3 in one day
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5 posted 2007-11-19 11:15 PM


i know that sucks i wish we could post more
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6 posted 2007-11-19 11:19 PM


i seriously agree with u hey do u have aim screen name or hotmail cuz i got one i got aim and hotmail
justanotherstorm
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7 posted 2007-11-19 11:25 PM


nah i dont have aim or im but i have hotmail i can make one tho
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8 posted 2007-11-20 12:50 PM


wow this was really good I liked it a lot
Krysti

maddorani
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9 posted 2007-11-20 02:10 AM


ok so if u have a hotmail plz give it to me or if u dont have aim then make one cuz i use aim more than hotmail lol sometimes wen im at school i would be chatting with ppl sometimes lol
maddorani
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10 posted 2007-11-20 03:49 PM


you are a good riter

maddorani

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11 posted 2007-11-20 07:17 PM


thanx maddorani and hunnie_girl

maddorani
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12 posted 2007-11-20 08:21 PM


man i am so bored so r u even on a weeekend yet i just dont know wut to do i feel lonely without him also when i take a shower and get out of the shower i start thinking aobut him and also i dont want to tell him how i feel either it was this close that he find out cuz the day he asked me out at that time i liked someoen else but then i was starting to like and i had those feelings and then i was describing my feelings to him and i was like u know wut i was plying around with u lol
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13 posted 2007-11-20 08:42 PM


thats sad yd u tell him u were playin thats not nice well w/e and yeah im off now thank God no more skool for now yess so happy
maddorani
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14 posted 2007-11-20 08:48 PM


actually i didnt want to tell him he asked me if i liked him and i thought he was real like he really meant it when he told me he was joking around then i told him that i dont like u i still like that person lol but now i like him i mean in my spanish class imm so close to him hes the closest one and his closest freinds moved but i rote him a email clled im so sorry hopefully he replied im not chkeing my mail until he repleis lol im so curiosu so did u read my seasons and a storm im gonna post another one im starting to love you more probably lol
justanotherstorm
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15 posted 2007-11-20 08:59 PM


yeah i read seasons imma read storm next
umm cool

maddorani
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16 posted 2007-11-20 09:06 PM


ok lol i submitted one more today im starting to love you more so plz read that one too oh yea dont forget to give me ur msn
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17 posted 2007-11-21 06:56 PM


Wow, this was really sad. I just went thorugh this with a friend of mine. So i know how you feel. Nice write

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

maddorani
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18 posted 2007-11-21 07:33 PM


yea i agree wiht u too
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19 posted 2007-11-21 08:34 PM


so W was this supposed to be about me or sumthin??
lol

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

justanotherstorm
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20 posted 2007-11-21 09:08 PM


nah it was just on my mind V
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21 posted 2007-11-21 09:22 PM


its not bouts u i still..nvm
but i cant blieve i was stupid
i cant blieve i fell for that

maddorani
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22 posted 2007-11-21 09:26 PM


i liked the way how u described it at the end its nice but im too lazy to put my new ones rite now
rebelangelv
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23 posted 2007-11-21 10:27 PM


it wasnt was it??? sure it wasnt lol
u still wut?
hahhahhahahhahahhahhahahhahahhahahhahahhahahhahahhahahhah that was sooo flipping hilarious!!!
looks like ur stalker girl is in love w/ u n ur poems....hehe

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

justanotherstorm
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24 posted 2007-11-21 10:59 PM


nah it wasnt
shut up it aint funny
stalker what?? what u talkin bout

rebelangelv
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25 posted 2007-11-21 11:10 PM


u still wut?????? huh huh huh didnt ur madre eva teach u it was rude to start a sentance and not finish it...
ur internet stalker...
n e ways we shouldnt b talking on here....continue the convo in an email or sumthin....

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

maddorani
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26 posted 2007-11-21 11:17 PM


shut up anyways i like someone else in my school and im not stalking her by the way also i liek to read other ppls poems and say there good if u want to be mean then be mean but im not a mean person im a nice person but if someone is mean to me trust me i will be mean to them and i already have a crush on someone already ok but HES in my school and in my class
justanotherstorm
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27 posted 2007-11-22 12:30 PM


v: nah my mom neva told me nothin bout that but why would i care now i mean we all do it so w/e stop bein mean
justanotherstorm
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28 posted 2007-11-22 12:32 PM


aight everyone stop
dont be mean to eachother and dont start nothin
jeez n e ways

maddorani
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29 posted 2007-11-22 12:37 PM


lol shes the one whos trying to be mean hey i emailed u bak so chke ur email ok hahaha so have a good thanksgiving break mine suks already lol
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