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maddorani
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0 posted 2007-11-19 04:37 PM




let me sleep
but don't wake me up
becuase i'm scared to face the truth
scared to face the truth of loving you
it seems like a dream that i like you
but i don't want to believe it but i have too
when i sleep
i have dreams about you
the dreams that i want to complete
let me sleep
but don't wake me up
just let me be alone for a while
let me think about the good memories that i had with you
also i'm sort of scared to face my life
a life which is a fantasy
a life which gives you pain and sadness in everyway
a life which is full of mistakes and love
well its not my fault life is like this
i wish people understood me but i guess i'm transparent like the wind
and it seems like i don't exist
i want to sleep
but never wake up

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2007-11-19 08:13 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

maddorani
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2 posted 2007-11-19 08:31 PM


thank hey wut grade r u in
prettypinkrebel
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3 posted 2007-11-19 10:06 PM


hey ,,,it's good.

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

maddorani
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4 posted 2007-11-19 10:09 PM


thank u this is how i felt i felt like dieing inside and sort of wish to die
justanotherstorm
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5 posted 2007-11-19 10:17 PM


nice poem i love it and i love sleep
maddorani
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6 posted 2007-11-19 10:30 PM


thanks but sometimes dont u feel llike didng when u did a huge mistake that everyone found out about thats how i felt sometimes i feel like dieing though
justanotherstorm
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7 posted 2007-11-19 10:47 PM


well yeah but its just a mistake we are just human we'll make huge mistakes or very little ones you shouldnt go on in life wanting to die cuz of the mistakes we did you shouldnt want to die at all but at times we feel that way but you get over it
maddorani
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8 posted 2007-11-19 10:59 PM


i guess lol but oh well im looking forward to go to school i feel so lonely and i dont know u guys that well u have been on this thing before me and i dont know ppl here that weel
justanotherstorm
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9 posted 2007-11-19 11:05 PM


yeah thats cool but why dont u chill wit yo friends call dem up
maddorani
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10 posted 2007-11-19 11:09 PM


there busy all the time and by the wway its holidays but u see i have this freind and i like him hes in my spanish class and he told me thqt im annoying and i asked him online when will we talk again so he was like never  and  u know how ppl are angry and thye say anything but hopefully me nad him are freinds but u see in my religion were not supposed to have boyfreinds were not supposed to like ppl as crushes but u see love jsut happens u cant control it and my mom asked me y i rite these love poems but i was lik i get it from music cuz she thought i like someone lol
justanotherstorm
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11 posted 2007-11-19 11:14 PM


well if u like this person u should be friends wit him first not close friends cuz yeah and see if this is really love cuz love isnt like an emotion well it is but not really its what you are willing to do for them like take care of them and stuff u know
what u cant have boyfriends why that sucks well are u dedicated to your religion?

maddorani
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12 posted 2007-11-19 11:18 PM


well u could sort of say like that i am sort of dedicated to my religion and also were allowed to talk guys on the phoen but trust i have talked to guys on the phone in school sometimes i feel so lonley that i want to havve a boyfreind and see wuts it like to have one u know the freind that i liked actually asked me out but fakely cuz u see he jsut wanted to find out if i liked him or not and he lied to me it seemed like he played with my haert i rote a poem about  that called i cant believe
justanotherstorm
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13 posted 2007-11-19 11:29 PM


awww thats said what a jerk
maddorani
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14 posted 2007-11-20 02:06 AM


yea i know but i still like him but he doesnt knwo u knwo y didnt want to tell him that i liked him cuz im scared to tell him the truth but the funny thing is i share the locker with him cuz i was in need of a locker and my lokcer was far away from my classes and his locker seemed closer to my classes lol but yea its funny how u could build freindships but u start liking them after a while i try not to like ppl as a crush but it just happens i try to suppress it but when ur heart beats for that person u cant cnotrol its invonluntary but hes really nice though
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15 posted 2007-11-20 07:24 PM


thats good but i wouldnt tell him that u like him yet wait a while till u think he would be cool wit that but yeah
maddorani
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16 posted 2007-11-20 08:15 PM


hey u got aim if u dont make one or if u have msn or hotmail then give it to me ok plz cuz i feel like talking ot someone

maddorani

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