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maddorani
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0 posted 2007-11-19 01:09 PM



your the love of my life
even though if you don't love me
be happy with whoever you want to be with
but i can't manage it
because i wished to have you
even though if i have someone else with me
these feelings will last for you
it seems like i am betraying that person
because that's the love that i have for you it's not for him
but i wish you could see me as your life partner
but you don't want to see it
i wish i could find a person like you but i can't
every single time my heart starts to beat faster
every single time my mind says your name
every single time i see your happy face
what can i do i can't get over with it
i can't forget you
because you are the love of my life and you mean alot to me
only once if you loved me in that way i would be happy
i just want to be with you
the fengs towards you are so strong
my love for you could never die
you might have loved other girls as i loved you
but why can't you love me in that way
why don't you love me as much as i love you
i don't know what to say anymore
all i can say is that this love is immortal
your the love of my life and always will be
no one can stop me from loving you
it will always remain in my heart and give me pain
becuase of the guilt that i fell for a guy like you but what does that has to with this
i feel comfortable with you
whenever i talk to you it seems like i have a strong connection with you
if i don't see you or talk to you i feel lonely
it would seem like a  day more than a good day
i always planned to be with you
i wish all of my dreams with you were real
your the only person that can understand me
i will always be close to you
i have more friends but your the only one who is special
it seems like your not my freind but someone else
i never knew you would be like this
i wish you could understand my feelings that i have with you
but i don't think if you ever will
i will be waiting for your answer
because your the only first and last love that i ever had
no one can take that away from me
i am even regretting it
just fall for me because i have been waiting for this time
your the only one for me
you the love of my life and always will be
but i still regret it
becuase it makes my heart weak and cold when i think about it
i will be with someone else
but your the one who i will love from the inside
there's no way i can forget
because that will last forever thats how you will be the love of my life

i rote this poem in september but its not about the person that i like now i liked one of my freinds but i let it go when i started to like someone else and now i like that person hes my freind and in my spanish class thanks


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1 posted 2007-11-19 01:17 PM


wow can definately relate to this one been there many times before. and still
Krysti

maddorani
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2 posted 2007-11-19 01:35 PM


thanks do u like this one
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3 posted 2007-11-19 03:58 PM


it seems like i am betraying that person
because that's the love that i have for you it's not for him~
Yes I did, this was my favorite part
Krysti

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4 posted 2007-11-19 04:09 PM


thanks i have more though i finishd my 1sst notebook and now riting in my second one im in high school live in houston texas and im a 10th grader but i miss my friends from last year but i have freinds this year but nwo its thanksgiving break so i miss them rite now i feel lonely


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5 posted 2007-11-19 08:14 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

maddorani
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6 posted 2007-11-19 08:30 PM


thank you
justanotherstorm
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7 posted 2007-11-19 10:21 PM


i had this feeling once and i got with one of my friends and i really liked them but things happened and our relationship and friendship ended oh well great poem
maddorani
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8 posted 2007-11-19 10:28 PM


thanks i like a freidn rite now but its a different freind trust me i have alot of guy freinds but dont u have that much girlfreinds by the way im a girl and also i never had a boyfreind and my religion is islam which means im a muslim lol i know it sounds funny
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9 posted 2007-11-19 10:44 PM


imma girl too i have almost an equal amount of guy and girl friends but i hang wit the girls more well sort of i guess hmm well yeah
so youre muslim thats cool i guess imma christian but im not a very good one cuz yeah...

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10 posted 2007-11-19 10:45 PM


oh and i never had a boyfriend either well once but not really
maddorani
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11 posted 2007-11-19 10:50 PM


well its sort of nice to get to know the ppl here cuz they can actually understand and help u when u need help but its nice to make freinds but once u graduate and ur going to miss all fo ur freinds that were close to u and start to think how ur going to meet them again and also having freinds in here is a good thing cuz u dont knwo the ppl u never saw them but being freinds is a soul a soul that can be heard but cant see  u get my point do u
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12 posted 2007-11-19 11:07 PM


yeah i get u i liked how u worded that at the end
yeah well the ppl on here r the ppl in the world a lot of ppl understand others situation we just choose not to tell them directly or they dont feel like talkin at the moment u get what i mean

maddorani
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13 posted 2007-11-19 11:15 PM


yea i get wut u mean sometimes i word some stuff deep llike u know how i worded this one i think it may se like it was deep u think i worded it a little deep
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14 posted 2007-11-19 11:18 PM


yeah its deep
maddorani
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15 posted 2007-11-19 11:22 PM


but u see my cousin hes a year older than me and on aim in my buddy profile i put this poem called loneliness and he was like atleast be thankful that u have a family and also he was like htis poem suks by the way and he said he can rite better poems then me than i was luaghing and was like yea rite
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16 posted 2007-11-19 11:27 PM


lol thats funny i would like to see his poem then but youre good
maddorani
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17 posted 2007-11-20 02:09 AM


thanks so do u have aim or hotmail cuz if u have aim or msn we could chat on there lol ya and i bet he cant even make one but they used to live in new york moved here for 3 yrs and moved bak thank god im happy lol
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18 posted 2007-11-20 08:37 PM


wow i liked this...i could feel ur emotion in it. dont worry ur not the only one whos eva felt this way.

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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19 posted 2007-11-20 08:41 PM


lol thats cool yeah i have one
maddorani
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20 posted 2007-11-20 08:42 PM


thank you but r u a gilr or a boy cuz im a girl and by the way im a muslim and in my religion im not supposed to have a boyfreind but i just want to feel like wuts it lilke to have one cuz there are so many girls in my school that are the same religion as me and had so many boyfreinds bbut i never had and i did like ppl about 3 and none of them liked me bak gosh there was someone who could like me too and also i wear glasses i dotn wear make up except lip gloss cuz u see eyeshadow or mascara wont suit me i think im the ugliest girl in the whole world lol thats how i feel no one will like me cuz im ugly

maddorani

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21 posted 2007-11-20 08:44 PM


then can u give me ur hotmail or aim plz we could talk on there on msn here is mine madii13@hotmail.com wuts urs

maddorani

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22 posted 2007-11-20 09:02 PM


i bet u aint ugly and i bet lots of guys like u
i wear glasses but only during class hmm yeah

maddorani
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23 posted 2007-11-20 09:04 PM


omg when i come home i take my glasses out and when im at school i wear them lol so plz give me ur msn so that we could chat on there and its so nice to have a friend like you
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