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charlie18
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0 posted 2007-11-14 12:29 PM


I try to be happy, but I never suceed.
Why is it so hard for me?
So many mistakes haunt me every day.
What's wrong with me?
Why do I have to be this way?
Is there ever giong to be a time when I act like a average teenage girl?
Have no dark thoughts, no care in the world.
People say I have no feeligns, they aren't even close to the truth.
I don't know how to let my emotions run free.
It's hard to stop being the real me.
I don't think there is going to be a day, i'm free from this enemy.
All the lies and so much pain.
It's all my fault but I feel no shame.
I'm alway the one to blame.
With my heart as cold as the Artic Sea.
My feelings I don't wear on my sleeve.
All the things I have done in the past.
Every heart I have broken in half.
All the times I laughed that fake lugh.
People can never understand what hurts me all th way to my soul.
That is why I write these poems..

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1 posted 2007-11-14 01:51 AM


Welcome to Passions liked this many times i have felt like that 2..
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-11-14 05:32 AM


umm, we (speaking as a teenaged girl myself) are not adverage, i have never ever come across a teenaged girl with no care in the world. welcome to passions and welcome to hell (aka life as a teenaged girl). HOpe Writing helps you as it has me.

-Kate

Lucetta:
"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Shakespeare's
The Two Gentlemen of Verona (I, ii, 23-24

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3 posted 2007-11-14 10:01 AM


you grow out of it, and you will learn to express yourself exactly as you want. The teen years seem to be a scrambling of emotions and all of them feel so extreme... it does get better, thank God.

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fromme2U
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4 posted 2007-11-14 05:42 PM


I agree with everyone who has posted comments, once you pass teen age years things do get better and then you look back and feel a sense of accomplishment
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5 posted 2007-11-14 06:01 PM


I love ur work && welcome to passions. <3
Teen Years Rele suck :[ , hoping its gets better along w/ u
LUV,
Adreanna Leigh

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

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