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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-11-13 09:35 PM



Second Chances Never Matter

What happened to second chances?
Your question has caught me again
I don’t believe in being a fool
That has where my life has been

I believe in a second chance
But not a foot print in my back
It’s your own fault- it’s entirely you
Putting your heart up for a whack

This time I won’t say I’m sorry
Your chances are all gone now
It was so blatantly simple
But you cowered like a cow

My heart is far broken
And I’m to tired of mending
My eye’s tears are crying out
Where is the ending?

So what happened to second chances?
You threw them out behind you
Choosing two word answers
Where a hundred words you knew

Lucetta:
"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Shakespeare's
The Two Gentlemen of Verona (I, ii, 23-24

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1 posted 2007-11-14 01:37 AM


Kate loved this hope to read more soon haven't really been here very much...
Krysti

BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-11-14 05:46 PM


Hey I'm back!! I really like this one, although, i do have to state my opinion. I believe that second chances do matter for some people really do change. Anyways, i'm glad i read this

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2007-11-14 05:55 PM


i know they do, i believe i state that in the poem somewhere- it was the heat of the moment title.

Lucetta:
"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Shakespeare's
The Two Gentlemen of Verona (I, ii, 23-24

BrittanyJ
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4 posted 2007-11-17 06:22 PM


Ah, yes. Now that i go back and look for it, i found where you stated that:0

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RevengeIsMine
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5 posted 2007-11-17 08:40 PM


This is great kate.. your work is growing on me

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-11-18 10:45 AM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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