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fromme2U
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0 posted 2007-11-13 02:54 PM



A pain within myself.

I can still remember holding you in my arms
Caressing your soft skin and loving your new charms
Sleeping next to you looking into your beautiful eyes
While I sadly put on a happy disguise
I can smell on you the scent of nature’s perfume
While I hold you one last time, for now you are out of my womb
Goodbye was the hardest thing to say my child
Especially to see I was the first person to have seen, when you first smiled
I don’t know how to replace all those lost years
But please forgive me for acting out my youthful fears
I was a teenager confused and alone
Maybe it’s too late to tell you that my maturity has grown
I am sorry for all that I have lost
I didn’t think that one day your life would be the cost
Take this rose that I lay on your grave
And know that to guilt I am now its slave!
Written by: NR

The hardest decision in life can be the easiest mistake to make.. my heart goes out to those who have really lost someone.

© Copyright 2007 NRomero - All Rights Reserved
prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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1 posted 2007-11-13 06:11 PM


I totally agree,the hardest desiconsions suck && I know this for shure since losing my 2 Best friends

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

T.Cooper
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2 posted 2007-11-13 09:34 PM


I really liked this, kind of struck home with me on some things... great job
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2007-11-13 09:39 PM


Sleeping next to you looking into your beautiful eyes
While I sadly put on a happy disguise


ummm, my life in your words.

-Kate

Lucetta:
"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

Shakespeare's
The Two Gentlemen of Verona (I, ii, 23-24

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2007-11-14 01:48 AM


wow this was so nicely written i loved it
Krysti

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