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Shake
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0 posted 2007-11-12 11:59 AM


This poem is for my girl, Jennifer. I love her sooo much!

If I should die before I wake,
I pray that Angels keep you safe.
And if I should wake before I die,
I pray that you don't see me cry.
If my soul burns and yours soars,
I pray you get through Heaven's doors.
And if you reach those golden gates,
I pray the Lord your soul to take.
If you should die before I did,
I'd die on the spot to see you again,
And I hope our souls are tied together.
I pray you stay with me forever!

~Dedicated to Jennifer


Feedback is appreciated!

© Copyright 2007 J. Maree - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-11-12 12:30 PM


it's very sweet...I'm sorry I don't have much more feedback than that.
BrittanyJ
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2 posted 2007-11-12 08:22 PM


This was very touching I enjoyed reading very much! And i hope to see more soon.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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3 posted 2007-11-12 10:23 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2007-11-14 12:45 PM


awe this was the sweetest poem. Jennifer is a really lucky gurlie oh and it was very well written flow was flawless
Krysti

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5 posted 2007-11-15 08:53 AM


wow. you need no advice. it was perfect.

-Kate


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

prettypinkrebel
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6 posted 2007-11-15 11:39 AM


this was absoulutely amazing. I wish  i could wrie 1/2 this good. good job :]

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

fromme2U
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7 posted 2007-11-15 01:37 PM


jenifer is a lucky girl!
Shake
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8 posted 2007-11-17 10:27 AM


Thanks so much yall!

Gods and Demons,
Keys, Lyrics, and Vocals
~Shake

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