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0 posted 2007-11-11 10:15 PM


I’ve always been
Out on my own
Never been loved
Nor have I ever known
Feelings this strong for someone else
You’ve helped me see
More than myself

The stars in the sky seem brighter
The sun always shines
The light never dies
Darkness is gone away
Since you made me see
More than myself

It don’t matter how
What matters is why
Why you were there
Why you held me tight

All through the night
And though just a dream
Is real; so real
At least it’s real enough for me

For living on dreams
Is all I can do
Because I know in my heart
I don’t stand a chance with you

If only you loved me too
If only you could see
Someone other that you…



© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
prettypinkrebel
Member
since 2007-11-07
Posts 104

1 posted 2007-11-11 10:39 PM


Omg...I feel this SO much right now.. it brought tears to my eyes, good emotion!!!i GREAT Write :](applause)

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-12 10:18 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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