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pen&paper
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0 posted 2007-11-11 10:41 AM


Life doesn’t always turn out as planned
Believe me when I say I know
There’s always something you don’t wanna do
But ya have to
And ya don’t wanna let the pain show
Oh, believe me, I know

But maybe you’ll be okay
Just get yourself through today
And tomorrow could be better
Or your pillow could be wetter
From your tears

There may not always be someone here
To have your back
But you’ll always have the Good Lord
And in Him you’ll never lack protection
Even if you don’t believe

Life doesn’t always turn out as planned
Believe me when I say I know
There’s always something you don’t wanna do
But ya have to
And you don’t wanna let the pain show
Oh, believe me, I know

You dodge another bullet
A million more are coming fast
You starting to lose control
But you won’t give up just yet
There’s more to life than this
But you don’t know what yet
For once you need to forget
And sing along to a melody of no regrets

Life doesn’t always turn out as planned
Believe me when I say I know
There’s always something ya don’t wanna do
But ya have to
And ya don’t wanna let the pain show
Oh, believe me, I know

Life doesn’t always turn out as planned
But maybe it won’t be so bad later on
You’ll find a happier song
To sing along to
Ya know ya want to
And it’s okay, let the pain show
Oh, believe me, I know
Better now


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1 posted 2007-11-11 03:18 PM


And tomorrow could be better
Or your pillow could be wetter~
I liked this part becaeuse it is so true, you never really do know what'll happen tomorrow I liked the way you captured the meaning of such a big subject into a poem
Krysti

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2007-11-11 09:23 PM


you know this would make a really great song. if u can play guitar or piano i would recommend coming up with a melody to put to this i think it would come out really great.

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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3 posted 2007-11-11 09:42 PM


I agree with rebel...it would make a gr8 song ...nicely put! Love it!
~`**adreanna`**~

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

pen&paper
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4 posted 2007-11-11 10:12 PM


I did actually wrote as a song but I can't play any instruments very well.
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2007-11-12 10:18 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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