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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2007-11-10 08:57 PM


umm yeah this aint finished but yeah

i wanna say happy birthday
but i cant
stuck at home
left to taint
i wanna be there with you
cuz i miss you
and my words are true
just wanna see you again
i wanna see my best friend
im sorry im not there right now
but ill make it up to you somehow
you want my money thats fine
just dont be a gold digger
in those dangerous mines
also youre on my mind all the time
dont know what else to say
but
happy birthday

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prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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1 posted 2007-11-10 09:11 PM


I know how this feels! My best friend moved to TX and I just recently missed her 18th! it upset me so much! but too be quite honest even though your not there if ur thinkin of them sometimes it feels you are there, if that makes any sense...but LOVE the poem...if i can help any just say so!!

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

justanotherstorm
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2 posted 2007-11-10 09:17 PM


i remember TX loved it there but then i moved so yeah thanks your friends 18 my friend is 15
prettypinkrebel
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3 posted 2007-11-10 09:21 PM


yea...I lived in Tx too...Hated it!! But miss it now! LOL odd how things turn out aint it
<3
~~**Adreanna Leigh**~~

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

justanotherstorm
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4 posted 2007-11-10 09:26 PM


yeah lol thats cool

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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5 posted 2007-11-11 05:58 PM


heyyyy it was my b-day like 2 days ago no w8 yesterday. my friend couldnt come tho cuz her rents h8 me. i bet she could prolly relate to this i know i did. great job justanotherstorm

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-11-12 10:17 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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