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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
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that So Cal

0 posted 2007-11-09 09:34 PM



I stand
before a mirror,
it's nothing special...just a mirror on the wall.
Yet there's more to this reflection after all.

'Cause when
I stand,
I am not there.

Sure, it's me
jeans, a shirt,
kind of short hair.
But something's missing.
Something's not there.

Or maybe,
something extra,
an unnecessary burden,
is there.

I can't breathe as well,
I can't see as well,
I can't hear as well,
I can't feel as well,
I can't...
think...

What is this mask?
What is this lie?

Again, I write out of verse.
Again, I write freely.
So am I truly bound by a mask?
Or...
Could this be me?

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

© Copyright 2007 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-11-10 12:42 PM


wow you are just amazing I love the content to this, How many times I've wondered this myself.
Krysti

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
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2 posted 2007-11-12 08:36 PM


Ah the unanswered questions themselves are a burden to carry. I enjoyed reading this, and can't tell you how many times i've asked myself those very questions. If you ever need to talk my e-mail is on my profile.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2007-11-12 10:24 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
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4 posted 2007-11-13 05:36 PM


wow i agree you are amazing, this is really good.
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