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Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal

0 posted 2007-11-09 09:26 PM


Untitled because a title wouldn't do it

My dreams are precious,
like the treasured
gems.
Buried
deep,
within my soul,
growing strong and whole.

My friends are loving,
loved,
and always there.
They always
trust,
hope,
and share.

My sorrows
and my despairs,
etched deeply,
throughout my life,

My joys, and
joys,
and joys...
All intertwined,

FORM THE FOUNDATION.

Love, beneath it all.


I rarely write free-verse, so this was kind of spontaneous.

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

© Copyright 2007 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-11-10 12:41 PM


Wow, Andrew I liked this new style from you. ya nailed it
Krysti

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-12 10:15 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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