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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-11-09 08:28 PM


When you kiss me I get shivers down my spine
I just can't believe you're actually mine
you treat me like I really do matter
I kiss you and think you're as mad as the hatter

I love when you kiss my fingertips
and even more when you kiss my lips
it's all in the way you look in my eyes
every bit of reluctance immidiately dies

I think of you at night before I go to bed
and when I wake up you're still in my head
I love listening to your heart and it's gentel beat
and how you always sweep me off my feet

When you kiss me I get shivers down my spine
I'm so happy that i can call you mine.

~I've finally moved on possibly past heart break..ahh but you know what they say, the way to get over a guy is to find a newer model ~

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that So Cal
1 posted 2007-11-09 09:07 PM


This is a nice poem, and I'm glad you're over your past heartbreak. I laughed when I read the last line of the first stanza! "Mad as the hatter", nice one...

It's great to read a different type of poem! Haha! JK! Seriously though, congrats and I hope it works out!

Sincerely,
-Andrew

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2007-11-11 09:34 PM


awwww hunnie, im soo happy for you and am sooo glad ur doing better. this was really good i loved it and i love u!!! uve been thru a lot but ur strong

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

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