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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-11-09 08:24 PM



I'm allowing myself to move on
you're the only part of me that i want gone
I've finally gone and met someone new
and I love him more than I ever loved you

He gives me all his love and says sweet things
i look forward to what the next day brings
so before you go and tell me you want me
dont let yourself get lost in possibilities

'cos I dont want you like i did before
I don't even need you anymore
to me you're just another picture to burn
and i'll get my revenge it's finally my turn

[This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (11-10-2007 12:43 PM).]

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Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal
1 posted 2007-11-09 09:13 PM


Letting go is pretty hard, but I'm happy for you! You don't have to answer since this question is personal, but I can't help but ask: How long did it take you to get over this guy? Again, please don't feel pressured to answer.

Andrew

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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2 posted 2007-11-10 07:10 AM


"... it's finally my turn."

i loved that. i feel that way sometimes, it's hard to let go, i know i'm going through the same thing. and it hurts to tear away the stiches that keeps him bound to you.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

comoloco7
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since 2007-09-21
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3 posted 2007-11-10 06:56 PM


there is no releaf greater than letting go of someone.  I feel the emotions that you portray and I can relate to that in my own way.  Let the anger be the ink in your pen and let the world know the strength within.  Im looking forward to more poems from you.

In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died.

prettypinkrebel
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4 posted 2007-11-10 08:47 PM


I wish i could let go...your poem is very inspiring .. and it shows how relieving yet hrtfulit can be at the same time. keep up the good work...

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

justanotherstorm
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5 posted 2007-11-10 08:51 PM


revenge is sweet aint it
tight poem

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-11-12 10:17 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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