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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-11-08 09:12 PM



Murmur Sweet

Sometimes when I murmur in my sleep
I think on the dreams you are dreaming
At least, in my dreams
And as I stay safe asleep
These words I murmur love

Can you resist the chance to be with me?
Love, do I make your mind wander
Like the irresistible flow of river waters
Catching on, and holding tight,
When all you wanted was to take a dip in

The kind of love we have
Is so different, pulling and wild
But I have to choose now between you
And my ever present conscience
But my I love to love you

It’s the kind of love that’s dangerous
The decisions I’m facing
Are so hard to understand
For once, the path is murky
For once I don’t know which is right

It’s my choice and my heart
Is split between my God and you
But God shall surly win
This war no mortals see
Though I know the choice to be mine




"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
1 posted 2007-11-08 09:48 PM


Some choices are near impossible. But in the end, the hardest choices are usaully the ones that help the most, even if you make the wrong choice ('cause you learn from them right?)

This poem made me realize that and I thought I'd share it. Good luck!

-Andrew

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 2007-11-09 12:27 PM


Thanks, andrew, that really helped.

-Kate

i've made my desision, of course, God won

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2007-11-12 10:12 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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