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Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal


0 posted 11-08-2007 02:33 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse


I'm so sorry. I'm being extremely selfish right now.

I look outside,
and stare at the rain,
only to see,
a mirror of pain.

I draw inside,
and crash into bed,
only to hear,
your words in my head.

I walk away,
to try and repent,
only to smell,
your lingering scent.

I run back,
to face my fears,
only to taste,
the salt of my tears.

I turn away,
just as I planned,
longing to feel,
your welcoming hand.


I think I'm going to cry. That's the second time since the last time I cried, about a year ago.
© Copyright 2007 Andrew - All Rights Reserved
moondogz
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1 posted 11-08-2007 06:14 AM       View Profile for moondogz   Email moondogz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for moondogz

Very sad, I hate to see a brother in pain Assassin_of_Verse, but it's better to be in pain than to be in denial. Thanks for sharing and I wouldn't be to concerned about being selfish...when you are in need of sharing, then this is the place for it.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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2 posted 11-08-2007 04:33 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

I think we all feel this way every once in a while, i liked the lines about their words running through your head . . .how many times that's happened to me.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

rebelangelv
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since 05-28-2007
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3 posted 11-08-2007 11:03 PM       View Profile for rebelangelv   Email rebelangelv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rebelangelv

awww that was great and i didnt think u were selfish..  hope u feel better

If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you"  

hunnie_girl
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4 posted 11-09-2007 02:56 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow this was amzing the flow was so flawless and i loved the content I can relate so well to it. very nice poem and I hope you feel better
Krysti
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5 posted 11-09-2007 03:37 PM       View Profile for surf_painter   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for surf_painter

another amazing and flawlessly designed poem it was amazing and full of emotion these are great works of art
Assassin_of_Verse
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that So Cal


6 posted 11-10-2007 02:17 AM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

The people here are so friendly and supportive. Thank you all for your support! *Sniff* I think I'm going to cry again...

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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7 posted 11-10-2007 07:11 AM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

that's why i could never stop posting here, everyone's too nice.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

prettypinkrebel
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8 posted 11-10-2007 08:37 PM       View Profile for prettypinkrebel   Email prettypinkrebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for prettypinkrebel

I love it it flows so beautifully.Everyone has to be selfish once and a while its the ony way to keep sanity, We are all here to help...hope the pain fades soon.

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

BrittanyJ
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since 06-03-2007
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9 posted 11-12-2007 08:33 PM       View Profile for BrittanyJ   Email BrittanyJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrittanyJ

This was amazing. I especially loved the first line, but i can't say that it was my favorite part...cause the whole thing was. lol, anyways, i loved this!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


10 posted 11-12-2007 10:23 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
fromme2U
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11 posted 11-13-2007 05:38 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

this is sad but very well written.
charlie18
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12 posted 11-14-2007 12:33 AM       View Profile for charlie18   Email charlie18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for charlie18

this was a amazing poem.
i could feel the emotion that was running through you as you wrote this.
i enjoyed reading this.
KandyGrl511
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13 posted 12-02-2008 07:28 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

oh sooo very sad but i loved it so much!?!
BrittanyJ
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Come find me?


14 posted 12-23-2008 01:45 PM       View Profile for BrittanyJ   Email BrittanyJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrittanyJ

Wow, very emotional...and touching. I hope you're feeling better by now...

Do you really love me? Or should i just let go now??

KandyGrl511
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15 posted 12-23-2008 07:55 PM       View Profile for KandyGrl511   Email KandyGrl511   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for KandyGrl511

that is good~!?!~NICE WRITING~!?!~
 
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