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Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2007-11-05 06:22 PM

My life has fallen to shambles before my eyes
I have not been this depressed in so long a time
what can i possibly do to make myself realize
that you will no longer be the love of my life

I had a love for you that runs deeper than any sea
but when you left for good i became blind with fury
My pain was beyond any sort of comprehension
You betrayed my love and stole my heart in the end

Yet i cant forget you or your beautiful smile
I cant stop thinking about the time we shared
You still have me mezmerized heart and soul
Why did you have to leave me so trapped and alone

Every time i try to seperate myself from you
You draw me back in, only to cause me more pain
I know that i loved you wholeheartedly at one time
But today i forget you for good to end my heart's dismay.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-11-05 06:34 PM

beautiful first post. i loved it, and i hope to see more. it reminds me of what someone tells me everyday. it's so sweet, it means alot to those of us on the other end, i loved it.

-Kate

ps welcome to passions

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

2 posted 2007-11-05 06:43 PM

kate this is nevermore93. i tolf you this on one of your poems. i posted a reply. its your newest one. thanx for the comment

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-11-05 09:20 PM

I know, now. lol. Of course I looked at the new people's post before i looked at my own. Your title (and i must admit that catchy name) caught me up, so i had to look. it was awesome.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-11-06 01:51 AM

I liked this Andrew but why did you change your old username? what was wrong with that one?
Well hope to read more
Krysti

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

5 posted 2007-11-08 08:55 PM

Andrew, I think we could have been brothers! Lol... *sigh* Anyway, good poem, made me really think, my friends go through the same problems as I do. Thanks for posting buddy!

P.S. Seriously though, why did you change your name?

As assassin shouldn't fall in love.
-The lovestruck assassin

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2007-11-12 10:11 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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