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Teen Poetry #8

Untitled 11.1.07.

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2007-11-05 03:03 PM

Untitled 11.1.07.

You're desperate like a washed up dancer
watching all the other couples twirl around
a patterned floor, searching for answers
in lazy mouths and eyes turned down.
Every single wish at twin elevens
reminds you that dreams shatter
and even in your imagined heaven
the gates of hell still matter.
Maybe you're better off with eyes
shut tight against the light in the morning,
knowing that the truth felt like lies
and a wish can even become a sting.
Ignore the feelings of doubt,
you'll regain your dancing legs again
twirling and moving about
in the arms of some charming man.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-11-06 01:37 AM

Awe I really liked this one the ending was my favorite

Krysti

young_blood
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since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2007-11-06 08:15 PM

well thanks for reading

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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3 posted 2007-11-06 08:54 PM

aww I loved this. my favroite (for now) by you. You're so talented, it amazes me.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-12 10:09 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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