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surf_painter
Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2007-11-03 10:45 AM


Inspiration
Hides from me
Behind the door
Of eternity

When words get tangled
Together in piece and pain
The notes go dry
What happened
To the thought

My forgetfulness
Causes this pain
When will I get it
The energy
The inspiration

Motivation
Is what
Is killing me
I just want...

The words flowing freely
From the end
Of my pen
That's when

I'll be the one
Running, dancing,... inspiring


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young_blood
Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN
1 posted 2007-11-03 10:25 PM


i like this. i like this alot. i don't even know why. i suppose that it is simple and just real. well done.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2007-11-12 10:05 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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