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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-10-31 01:40 AM



Stand up and applaud
For I’m the girl from Australia
I’m a desperate housewife
A complete and utter failure

I don’t know how I got here
They didn’t give me a fancy dress
They just threw me an apron
And told me to clean up the mess

You see now I can’t escape
I’ve been left in this hole to rot
In this dark and dreary hole
A tricky lil spot

I can go to college
If I don’t move out
Because it’s my job to look after mother
And friends I must learn to live without

Hell I’m sick of crying
After all there’s barely any point
I can scream and shout all I want
But I get no inheritance if I leave this joint

I go to school five days a week
I leave at seven, return at four
Hell I ain’t like any normal kid
Because I don’t want to live anymore

Everyday without fail, waiting when I get home
Is a sink full of dirty dishes..
I wish my life was better
These are my solemn wishes

So stand up and applaud
This girl from Australia
I’m a desperate housewife
A complete and utter failure
So I pick up my gloves
Run water in the sink
Deep down she hates this life
More than anyone could think

So I’ll tighten up my apron strings
Hold my head down and sigh
Here I will start praying
That you don’t see the tears that are running from my eyes
Because I’m a desperate housewife
A title that suits me well
A good for nothing lazy daughter
Who insides hurting like hell…

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rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
1 posted 2007-11-01 10:30 PM


hmmmmm wow i liked it..random a little but i love random good write
hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
2 posted 2007-11-02 01:30 AM


No Jess you aren't worthless good for nothing.... you are already an amazing poet if nothng else. But i know there are many other good things inside that you have
Best Wishes
Krysti

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
3 posted 2007-11-02 06:28 PM


Aww thanks hunni...
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-12 10:01 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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