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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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0 posted 2007-10-29 06:13 PM


kk this is really a song but i thought id post it up n e way. sorry if its hard to read. this is also like a couple years old so its not very good but yeah here:

Lord please forgive me for leaving
I’m sorry for my sin
It was my fault
It was my decision
You never forsook me
I walked away
Because my life was gray
And now I pray
That you’ll forgive me
And let me come back into your family
All that time that I spent away from you
I wasn’t content
Needed to repent
I lost my faith
please give me some grace
Don’t let it be me you hate
Don’t want hell to be my fate.
I want to hear you voice
And see your face
When I'm standing there on judgment day
I became something that’s totally  
Not me
So I’m down on my knees
Asking you to help set me free
From my deceitful evil hold
I thought you were gone
even though I’ve been told
That you’d never move on
Never give up hope
I don’t know how to cope
With what I’ve done
I don’t want other to do what I did
I backwardly slid
I want them to know
That even thought I looked fine
That hurting soul of mine
Just desired more to die
I had crossed the line
And had wasted my time
It felt like a crime
To just abandon my Jesus
It just made everything worse
I ain't gunna win
And I want them to know
I won’t make that same mistake again

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-11-02 12:38 PM


I liked this it was really good I thinkk you should try to post something like this in Spiritual journeys. they would love your work I think...
Krysti

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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2 posted 2007-11-02 06:57 PM


theres a spiritual journey forum?? lol i didnt even know that!!!! lol yea i should huh
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-11-12 10:01 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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