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NCHSBULLDOG
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since 2007-10-29
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0 posted 2007-10-29 03:25 PM




It hurts.

It hurts to see her smiling face.

It hurts to know she isn't smiling at you the same way she used to.

It hurts to know the heart you thought was mended was so far from being fixed.

It hurts to want to be near her and cant get but so close.

It hurts.

I guess I will just move on.

Trying to re-mend the heart I thought was mended.

Eventually the hurt will go away.

For now I will just step back.

Step back to be unseen and unheard.

Just a friend who still wants to be in LOVE.

A best friend.

Her best friend!!!



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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-10-29 05:54 PM


ha ha ha, life sucks so bad. i'm in the same position, but i'm that girl. the one who just won't bend, and he's there, wanting so much more than the friendship we have.

-Kate

and once again may i input that life sucks, and that i wasn't laughing at you- just at how unfunny ironic stupid life is.

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-11-02 12:25 PM


Welcome to Passions it is good to have you here. I really liked this it was so true.. I know this exact feeling I guess. Well hope to read more soon
Krysti

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
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3 posted 2007-11-02 12:33 PM


danggggggggg i sooooo know this feeling.
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2007-11-12 10:00 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

prettypinkrebel
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since 2007-11-07
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5 posted 2007-11-12 10:41 PM


im kinda in this position only im the girl wanting more and HE {{NO NAMES (RAY)}} doesnt :[ Gr8 write :]

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

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