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Teen Poetry #8

The test of Love

Chelsealynn2
New Member

since 2007-10-28

Posts 2
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-10-28 09:12 PM

Have you ever felt your heart
get ripped through your chest
it tends to feel
just like a major test

This test is the hardest you will ever face
just thinking of it makes your heart race
you study for weeks and just when your ready
you think again and just want your teddy

This teddy he gave to you
back when he loved you too
it make you go back to that time
back when you know "he was all mine"

Now when you think you are ready for love
just remember that test and pray to above
that your test will be different it won't be so hard
if that is true maybe just maybe you can let down your guard

*~*Chelsea Lynn*~*

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-10-29 05:57 PM

humm, you know, i loved this. the rythem was a bit of in the beggining, but you pulled it together at the end. i've no doubt that you will get better. looking forward to reading more.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-11-02 12:30 PM

Welcome to Passions.. I really loved your first post.. I know this feeling of holding the teddy he got u and stuff.. wow reminds me of myself every night. Even tho I am going out with someone else I still hold the teddy all night and think of him...
Krysti

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-12 10:00 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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