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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Tonight Tonight what I really need Is someone to comfort me Tonight what I really feel Is something that makes me drowsy Tonight what I really want Is to cry until my ducts run dry Tonight what I’m thinking about Is how much I need someone Tonight it seems nothing Is curing me of low mood Tonight what I’m not getting Is someone who can comfort Tonight what I’m missing Is feeling awake Tonight what I can have Is to cry myself dry Tonight no one Is answering my thoughts Tonight nothing I know of Is curing me of this mood "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow been here many times..Loved the way you wrote this Kate. yes cry it out. It always feels so good afterwards doesn't it  Krysti |
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dah1namedj0na Junior Member
since 2007-08-19
Posts 19 |
i liked how you repeated the word "tonight". It strongly emphasizes the significance of that particular day, and conveyed your true emotions in those moments. Great poem nonetheless! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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